All Comments on 'Ezzie The Next Generation Pt. 09'

I really enjoy this story I loved the original but so far this is so much better and I’ve no idea why because I enjoyed the first one so very much.

Excellent chapter. I would really like to have Mary and Ezzie have a deep personal conversation unless they did and I missed it early on in the story. It’s strange that Mary has this major soft spot for kids with nobody and no home and I can understand why considering her past but I would think Mary would feel really bad for Ezzie since she is basically stuck in a ring alone and all she ever deals with is who ever has the ring asks and asks for everything and doing it constantly. I would at least see what I might be able to do for Ezzie to make her existence better or maybe some way to get Ezzie free from the ring.

This one isn't my thing quite as much as the original, but that's just preference. The writing itself is every bit as good as the original. I love what Mary is doing with her life, she's a good person and she's learning what she wants in life fast.