by SneakyDeaner
This story has it all - a fascinating theme with both sexiness and tenderness. Meticulous in its detail, as well as being well-written, it is literate and flows so well it hardly seems to be a lengthy story.
A wonderful achievement, SneakyDeaner. It should score more than 5 *s!
Thank you for sharing this marvellous talent with us.
Oh my! I cried I laughed I got so hot! Please tell me you plan on another chapter so we can follow her training?
You lost me at California falling into the ocean. Otherwise, decent premise and impressive grammar for the stories on here.