by SneakyDeaner
You lost me at California falling into the ocean. Otherwise, decent premise and impressive grammar for the stories on here.
Oh my! I cried I laughed I got so hot! Please tell me you plan on another chapter so we can follow her training?
This story has it all - a fascinating theme with both sexiness and tenderness. Meticulous in its detail, as well as being well-written, it is literate and flows so well it hardly seems to be a lengthy story.
A wonderful achievement, SneakyDeaner. It should score more than 5 *s!
Thank you for sharing this marvellous talent with us.