All Comments on 'Faithful Lou Ann's Dancing Lessons'

a whore is a whore is a whore 1*

Husband ever come back from the Bus Station?

Leaving was the only good thing he did in the whole story.

Quick go find a Greyhound and climb onboard.

There is already like 6 very similar versions of this awful story here.

can you write the same story but just change the location?

Can They Repair Their Marriage?

byJohn Randolph©

So far two. can I get a three?

Women are are weak and need a man to guide and protect them.

STOP! They aren't vapor heads!

They don't need their man to prevent them from cheating.

If she cheated she know what she was doing. With or without him she was going to cheat.

Husband was just a pawn to be moved out of the way.

I gave this one star because what the woman did was malicious, cruel, and should have ended in divorce.

grow some balls you cannot trust her is she telling the truth or just what she wants him to know out to the curb with her

Was the wife character cruel and selfish? Of course! But worst was the husband character: why did the writer has chosen a retarded man? She talked to him has she would talk to a five years child! And even so he didn't understood anything she said! 1*

One Star for this trash. You call this fucking erotic?

Before and it pissed me off then. So what do you think this one did?

What fucking Crap is this. Needs a major rewrite but by someone without a mangina.

I've read this story before. It was not any better then either. This bitch needs burning.

Not sure who is dumber, the slut or the slut's sucker. Let's just hope they don't reproduce. Two of these mental defects is more than enough.

Are you sad that someone thought this was “pour”?

Or are you still laughing at that one?

Well, duh, yeah.

If that isn't the world's most obvious hint then I don't know what is.

What kind of dancing lessons are a week long and how are you going to use it to reconnect when both are retarded?

Dancing is "Rocks" business. Or at least it should be since he's charging people for a week long retreat and they're supposed to be advanced....whatever that means. So on the first day he's already trying to seduce one of his clients?

Between the bullshit the author fed and the ridiculous situation contrived to allow the wife to cheat, I just wanted to puke.

Cuckold writers, why are there so many of You? Has the rainbow coalition destroyed that many "men"?

Common mediocre plot, writing suits it to a T

Dumb, unlikely behavior by shallow immatures.

Whatever.

Get it right or try reading instead of writing.

What he forgot to do was sneak up and put s bat across rocks knees and teach him not to fuck around with married woman.

One more marriage down the toilet and another stupid women single and pregnant.

One stupid ass cum dump slag.

Crock of shit stort.

why is there so many whore's and wimp's stories here.

when she came out of the bathroom, he was gone and she never saw her ex again...Ha, Ha

Congrats, the author took the beginning of a good story and turned it into this fucking train wreck. Pathetic.

Crap

Another slut and wimpy cuckold

Enough said

Total crap.