All Comments on 'Fall Break Pt. 01'

This was really fun to read. All in all a bit too much, I would have preferred the episode with the three others in a latter episode but I'm looking forward to reading the next episodes

I stopped half way through the second page. Started out boring then you brought Janette into the picture and it started looking up. two roommates secretly likening Bdsm gets together, showed lot of potential. two many bondage gar all at once. then a basement with a SA cross in and apartment building where they rent from. hard to believe even in a fantasy. well then comes to more friends pulling a dick to destroy. then they turn on one of their own and we can't tell who is talking and who is being turned. Come on Girl you can do better than putting everything you ever read about BDSM in part 1 of a story. scratch this one and try again.