All Comments on 'Family Business Ch. 08'

I like how you finish at the right time. All the relationships were mended, there wasn’t really new places to go. This was a good “learn to know yourself” arc with good smut in the middle. I’m already waiting for your new story

5 STARS! GREAT STORY! JUST TEND TO AGREE WITH A PREVIOUS COMMENT THAT THE SUB-PLOT INVOLVING ZAC'S MOTHER WAS A LITTLEOVER THE TOP.

I didn't like this one at the beginning, but this was an excellent recovery. You are undoubtedly one of the best writers on this site, I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

So glad she was pregnant by the end. Icing on an already near perfect cake. I can't wait for your next masterpiece, please don't make us wait too long.

As with most of your stories the ending feels a little abrupt but an excellent story nonetheless,

Cant wait for whats next, hope to see a continuation or spin off of hunting season.