All Comments on 'Family Perspectives Pt. 01'

by Risktaker48

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Decent

3* Because it’s unfinished. Unfinished in a way you can’t tell if it’s a cuckold story or what. Lol.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Uh

Just plain boring with no point.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggalmost 4 years ago

First Act Packed with Possibilites

Story could veer in the ditch in future installments but author did credible job so far.

I thank Risktaker48 for sharing.

mattenwmattenwalmost 4 years ago

I think smoking weed while writing is not good!

Impo_64Impo_64almost 4 years ago

Who is interested in a drunk or drugged woman's acts? No one...1*

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Maybe the story would read better through a mist of weed.

hindsight2020hindsight2020almost 4 years ago

It is all a bit hazy. Not in a good way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

one star

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I've finally started finishing some new stories (too many plot lines in my head), hopefully I will start completing more soon. Most of my writing is fantasy stories at the moment some are based on my own experiences. You dear reader will have to work out which! Thanks in advan...

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