All Comments on 'Family Picnic'

absolutely amazing, in more ways than one! Keep up the good work.

More good work! What else happened at the picnic? I'm sure someone got frisky after a couple of drinks. Looks like we need a sequel, lovely Heather!

It's a wonderful story, so real that you made feel like I was watching it all from behind a tree. Let's have some more soon! You are truly one of my favourites!

theres a mess in my shorts ........its in the public now....good gonna read it again , one word at a time !!!!!!!!

Short and just like the two pussies in your story, Very Sweet

I have to admit...you are descriptive...cassanovalee is how you know me

The lucky guy was the center of attraction ! He not only was getting sucked and fucked but got the visual pleasure of watching the watcher finger fuck and fondle herself. My wife and I are both exhibitionists and have found that a good way for both of us to get pleasure.

very good. What a nice surprise for the main character! Thank you.