All Comments on 'Family Picnic'

by alovelyheather

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bottovarnisbottovarnisabout 2 years ago

very good. What a nice surprise for the main character! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Center of attraction

The lucky guy was the center of attraction ! He not only was getting sucked and fucked but got the visual pleasure of watching the watcher finger fuck and fondle herself. My wife and I are both exhibitionists and have found that a good way for both of us to get pleasure.

phroggyphroggyover 15 years ago
Awesome that we spoke

I have to admit...you are descriptive...cassanovalee is how you know me

TheArtist_TheArtist_almost 16 years ago
Sweet

Short and just like the two pussies in your story, Very Sweet

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
oooo mmmmmm ggggdddd

theres a mess in my shorts ........its in the public now....good gonna read it again , one word at a time !!!!!!!!

rovijack43rovijack43over 17 years ago
Wonderful!

It's a wonderful story, so real that you made feel like I was watching it all from behind a tree. Let's have some more soon! You are truly one of my favourites!

yeomanjackyeomanjackalmost 18 years ago
What happened next?

More good work! What else happened at the picnic? I'm sure someone got frisky after a couple of drinks. Looks like we need a sequel, lovely Heather!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Amazing

absolutely amazing, in more ways than one! Keep up the good work.

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