by nnlistchecker4fun
Well. This story turned to crap quickly. No sense of reading anymore if this, just another cuck story. Such a disappointment.
Go start, and I hope the story gets more involved, and the dialkogue quotations continue as well.
For me the dialogue is making the story.
Chapter One fooled many of us, thought you were doing something fun and different. But, no. Should have known you would turn this into another cuck story.
Not interested in reading anything else by you.
I believe it is going to lead up to much sexual excitement. Only beware what you wish for. A friend lost his wife this way. I know, because she is my wife now.
Please continue- good beginning that could go in many directions.
You have some talent, please use it
Hi, NN
I love your writing style! Although short, I think your stories are well done and hot!
I'm going to contact you directly; we need to talk!
Love,
Casey