All Comments on 'Farm Fuck'

He's supposed to meet his wife, next paragraph she gets downgraded to girlfriend... next time proofread, all the mistakes took me right out

Isn't thar being a little picky?

“I look at my phone. 635 pm.”

Five sentences later, in the same paragraph: “My cellphone died an hour ago”

Wat?

I didn't know the gender of the person driving until the line with 'you boys' or 'my cock'. Wasn't prepped for bi stuff. now I'm looking at story tags and realizing should have. alas.

Thanks

I appreciate it.

Awful.