All Comments on 'Farm Fuck'

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BGJonesBGJones10 months agoAuthor

Thanks

I appreciate it.

ja99ja9910 months ago

I didn't know the gender of the person driving until the line with 'you boys' or 'my cock'. Wasn't prepped for bi stuff. now I'm looking at story tags and realizing should have. alas.

EastinriceEastinrice10 months ago

“I look at my phone. 635 pm.”

Five sentences later, in the same paragraph: “My cellphone died an hour ago”

Wat?

BGJonesBGJones10 months agoAuthor

Isn't thar being a little picky?

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

He's supposed to meet his wife, next paragraph she gets downgraded to girlfriend... next time proofread, all the mistakes took me right out

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