by BGJones
I didn't know the gender of the person driving until the line with 'you boys' or 'my cock'. Wasn't prepped for bi stuff. now I'm looking at story tags and realizing should have. alas.
“I look at my phone. 635 pm.”
Five sentences later, in the same paragraph: “My cellphone died an hour ago”
Wat?
He's supposed to meet his wife, next paragraph she gets downgraded to girlfriend... next time proofread, all the mistakes took me right out