by Plimboy
Did you mean you "lose" control? Poor way to introduce a story, with misused words.
When "Fetish" is in the title, maybe the story belongs in Fetish?
I think you "loosed" way more than you won with this garbage.
It's lose, not loose. Errors in the teaser are like omens for readers: read at your own risk. Why isn't this in Fetish or BDSM?