All Comments on 'Fiadh'

Mmm…romantic and erotic!

Two points to make: (1) the category seems to be wrong. Once you introduce a man

to participate in the sex scenes, then it's no longer a purely lesbian story. Erotic Couplings might have been more appropriate; and (2) the story finished rather abruptly without any real resolution (unless you intend to write more about Cheri and Fiadh).

i sometimes felt this was a tourist information catalogue. Descriptions were short and uninspiring. I expected more intimacy and sensuality. Pity

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