All Comments on 'Fireside Lovers'

Misspelling was distracting. I believe she "lay" or "laid" and I suspect the object of her affection were a "frock" coat instead of a "rock" coat.

Keep it going!!!

Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it. If I can go back and edit it I will. 👍🏻👍🏻 Will definitely be triple checking spelling from now on. 👍🏻

Thanks for the feedback it’s very much appreciated. I’ll definitely be triple checking my spellings from now on. 👍🏻👍🏻