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by Beejayne
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evelyn_carrollalmost 15 years agoThis is a very good short story
Good structure and well executed. More like this on Lit. please
Sambranoalmost 15 years agoSo exciting... great visuals!
Completely different from all your other stories, and quite erotic. I loved it.
PrincessErinalmost 15 years agoGreat
A very hot and sexy story that was well written. The ending was unexpected.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoliked the originality
Now I'll have to go back and read your other stories. Very good, thank you for a good read.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoGood overall
But a bit dodgy that he could get away with that. Still a nice little story.
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