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visioneervisioneer12 months ago

Good first story, sometimegal. Although a little brief, it's sexy exploration of your submissive desires. I suggest using past or present tense consistently -- your story switches between the two, which interrupts the story flow.

Please continue writing.

sometimegalsometimegal12 months agoAuthor

Thank you for the kind critique. I will continue to write with your advice in mind. ☺️

SugarDaddyDomSugarDaddyDom12 months ago

an excellent start. I look forward to more. please continue. as a good girl should.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Don’t say anything, you warned me. I was on my knees, my mouth full of your cock. I love you…

I’ll never forget us, Daddy. You’ve opened up a safe space for me to be whoever I wanted to be, no judgment or shame. How could I just bounce back from that as if nothing happened?

I’m sorry. It’s not easy for me. I might just revisit us from time to time. One day I’ll probably delete the account for good. Until then, I stay wet for you, Daddy. ❤️

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New gal with acute interests in BDSM and sexy sensual sex in general. Love a good, naughty story. If you care to look, I’m here too: https://fetlife.com/users/16810620

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