by sometimegal
Good first story, sometimegal. Although a little brief, it's sexy exploration of your submissive desires. I suggest using past or present tense consistently -- your story switches between the two, which interrupts the story flow.
Please continue writing.
Thank you for the kind critique. I will continue to write with your advice in mind. ☺️
an excellent start. I look forward to more. please continue. as a good girl should.
Don’t say anything, you warned me. I was on my knees, my mouth full of your cock. I love you…
I’ll never forget us, Daddy. You’ve opened up a safe space for me to be whoever I wanted to be, no judgment or shame. How could I just bounce back from that as if nothing happened?
I’m sorry. It’s not easy for me. I might just revisit us from time to time. One day I’ll probably delete the account for good. Until then, I stay wet for you, Daddy. ❤️