All Comments on 'First Let's Unzip Your Religion Down'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
You or she, you or she...

Decent story, but the switch between 2nd and 3rd person descriptions was too confusing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
What?

A reasonable story - strange title!

Lukas

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Wow, It's been a long time since I submitted anything, not that I haven't had the fantasies, just never the urge to write them down. But this new one has been nagging at me for about a year or so now. I guess it's a love letter to my mother who passed away some years ago. I ho...