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by NwadZ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Needs editing.

Switches from second person (you) to third person (he) for no reason.

NwadZNwadZover 4 years agoAuthor
Edited

Thanks for the feedback. The upcoming edits should help with continuity.

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