All Comments on 'First Opportunities Ch. 03'

Okay... I retract what I said about this in chapter 2... Totally missed a paragraph. Oops!

I wish you'd have described your interaction about dressing in real time and included dressing suggestions and her efforts at putting makeup on you as well as styling your hair. Great story!!! Please keep writing!

Love the story. I wish you will finish his/her journey. I want to know how you want the journey to go. Please finish

Thank you for the note, vickie(!). Keeping some of what you've mentioned in the upcoming chapters.

Jackie, thanks for letting me know you like this. I'm on the next one. Soon!

This is building nicely!

Thanks Erica! I see you have written quite a few as well. Bookmarked!

Good build so far. Easy read. Great story can't wait for the next chapter