All Comments on 'First Time for El'

good story, not long enough. it made me remember my first time with a girl named babs. that was 60 years ago.

Good story!

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Another quirky fun piece; liked the off/on erotica — just what you might expect. A bit abbreviated when he “went down on her” and the finale — not as hot as you could have/should have made it. Liked it. Thanks for sharing your imagination.