All Comments on 'First Time Slave Pt. 01'

Nice erotic start, please write more.

Very hot and intense. Curve hugging black dress, red high heels, red lace crotchless panties and a matching bra... so sexy. Just reading that made my cock jump up. I especially liked how you slowly moved your hair so he could see the low back with crisscross details. Nice detail with you licking your lips as you pulled your bra down. That part made my dick throb. So naughty how your master made you do it in front of a large wall of windows, so anyone walking by outside could see you. Love how excited he got when he mentioned nipple clamps. So dirty how he rubbed his hard dick against your erected, clamped nipples, and did it again after cumming on your rack. So hot how he made you talk dirty as he fingered you until you came. As for constructive criticism, I would suggest that some more details, longer teasing and more obscene language would have made the story even hotter, but I still really enjoyed it. Keep up the great work. I will definitely read the other stories in your "First Time Slave" series. I jerked off so hard to this.