All Comments on 'Flower Garden'

Nothing interesting in this...Nothing is said about these characters, so it turns to be just a scene of a dog fucking a bitch in heat...1*

I liked the sex in public aspect of this.

A fun woman as bold as she is would be a perfect neighbor. I enjoyed reading, and look forward to a continuation.

A couple of suggestions: Maybe it's just me, but changing tense between present and past is a little confusing. Aside from tense, some synonyms for the word "cock" would make it more inviting. 33 times in a short story is a bit too often for the same noun.

I wish you success in your future writing.

Ho Hum

If her husband had not kicked her dumb ass out that same night. Don has no money to keep her in flowers, and she can not return to her former garden by court order so guess she will have to become a "railroad lady".. in order to feed herself.

Could you have worked the phrase "my garden" into the story any more freqeuently. The repeated usage was distracting and annoying.

except that there is nothing erotic about it. Try again, but get some help.

Your writing sounds like a man and not a woman. Men who try sounding like a woman rarely pull it off.

Let me be your neighbor

This sounds like a true story. If so wow what a lucky neighbor Don was.

Not so good. As with so many, Spellcheck is a good idea.