All Comments on 'For Miss Amy Pt. 01-02 - Beginning'

Preise with potential.

But nothing but real pain and real drinking piss.

Not erotic.

One star,

Thank you for the feedback. There are 25 total chapters and an epilogue currently written, and I will be posted them all eventually. The Woman for whom this was written loved it, and She was my primary audience. It was She who encouraged me to post it. There are many erotic elements, and for some, even the act of drinking piss can be quite erotic. I am a new writer, complete novice, so feedback is much appreciated as long as it is constructive.

Very impressive debut indeed. Two thumbs up. Waaay up!

Thank you so much!