by capn_doggy
i waited for ages for this installment ,awesome. thank you for your efforts to continue this story . i'm finding this really hot .please keep up the great work.
I can't BELIEVE YOU'RE BACK! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH THE CONTINUING ADVENTURES OF LEXI AND SYDNEY! I am gonna reread this about 8 more times tonight alone.
I love it!!!!!! Thanks for the chapter can't wait for the next one. There brilliant
Great stuff although like a typical addict i get that delicious lexi/syd fix and im left lusting for more.....always more
Love your work c doggy
This story has had me captivated since I began reading this morning. Please try and continue this series, I have already shown it to three people and they are also hooked. I wouldn't be surprised if more people are shown your incredible story.
Great story! Not only erotic but entertaining and engaging, really well done! Plase continue i cant wait to see what happens, im invested in the characters now :p
Your characters always have such charming chemistry. I'm also glad that you didn't pull the mary sue route with your main character. Looking forward to future chapters!
Keep up the good work~
totally need more of this story, I'm hanging on the edge here....just a little more...
I absolutely loved this story and I fell in love with the characters. You made me want more of lexi and sydni. please for the love of everything please continue their story.
I need it
thank you for writing these stories, and i hope that you continue it, this is the first story im saving (if you're okay with that) to reread on my ereader. thank you again for writing such lovely work <3
if you're ok with constructive criticism, id like to suggest something; when there is a quoted line of text " " i sometimes get confused with who is speaking/who the words after it are referring to. it seems that sometimes the words after it should be in the next paragraph--not always, but sometimes. just food for thought
Hey there.
I can say your story is the first I have ever read that has made me want to comment. I absolutely love it! It makes me jealous of Sydney. What she has with Lexi is amazing and beautiful. This really could be a published work considering how popular this genre is right now.
Keep up the good work. I am hooked! This story is beautiful and amazing.
I enjoyed reading this immensley. Exceptionally better quality than I hoped for and an all around charming story that had drama without breaking my heart. Well done.
Have to say I’m thoroughly enjoying reading Syd & Lexi’s story the second time around!
Don’t be a stranger Cap’n Doggy, all the best and thanks for writing/posting etc, Purplefizz.