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Click hereThe big cup of cum was passed around the group. Mom wanted some so bad it must have hurt. That's when we leave.
We meet up with the girls again, they are in basically the same spot. We go for dinner. They seat us with other couples at night, tables of eight so we met two lovely couples, they are from the other side and both are newlyweds. They had a ton of questions about our side of the resort. Their mouths are open half the time in shock.
To be continued ...
Story was going just great until Mother came on the scene. At his point it devolved into Master/Slave, BDSM and you lost me. Sorry, just not at all my bag . . . .
I think this another B.S. story, and it sickens me, that a son would be so mean to his mother even if he thought she should have stuck up for him when he was arrested for rape. May be his mom was also a victim because of his own father had issues and threaten his mom to be silent during Steven arrest for a crime he did not commit. I think Steven after the evidence cleared him, he developed a defeated attitude as being a screw up. This story seems so unrealistic it stinks. I think you have sadistic view of life and you are projecting your own insecurities in this story/
I’m out, can’t do this anymore I just wanna beat the main character within an inch of his life, yes he’s caring in ways but quite pathetic in many other circumstances, and how did it go to partner sharing, I apologise but your stories aren’t for me the main characters are pathetic and the stories lack structure and occasionally veer into chaos
The mom aspect is just plain stupid and not needed and is ruining this story. 4 pages could be eliminated and make this a better story. Ignore the mom period......... Why did you think it neccessary to make this even a point of emphasis in this story. He should be above this, ignore her and go on with the good stuff in life.
Alrighty, then...
Not really acceptable, this submission, after the sssooo beautiful words of Chapter 1...
This is bordering on garbage...I was gonna give 4 stars, but reduced to 3...too many issues with all the characters...and too much BDSM with mom...I know she is a bitch, and deserves to be confronted, but this is WWWAAAYYYYYY TOO MUCH!!
I am gonna read Chapter 3, or make an attempt...hope this does not go on there...
I am not happy, here...I am not fond of being critical like this, but....
Genuinely the worst turn the story could have taken. Not reading this POS anymore. Bye bye
You lost me as soon as Mom showed up and the sadism started. From a fairly good story line in went downhill to crap. 2 stars.
It is clear that this is fantasy and there is no connection to reality.
She sleeps with a guy naked in bed twice, on an airplane and on a yacht. Then she walks around the mall without her underwear, changing naked in the store. And says I'm sorry, I can't blow you. I believe the trauma is emotional. She hugs him and kisses him to hold him down, giving her sister a chance to give Steve a blow job. This is definitely fantastic.
Is Phoebe exclusive with her brother? Jenny says it often is and Phoebe will never marry another. And then right there on the island she sucks someone else's man's dick. Then from the group.
Fucked up piece of shit
I expected something much better than this after reading the first chapter