All Comments on 'Fourplay Pt. 01'

So, you guys are a couple in their mid 30's. You are such an immature arsehole that you go to your wife's "get together" with her childhood friends and proceed to get shit-faced to the extent you think you'll passout within the hour! Really intelligent stuff at your age.

Then you arrange a swinging swap with some couple you have only known for 3 hours. However, the readers can see why your wife wants other "lovers". That's why you go "swinging". Because you do NOTHING to seduce the other woman. Shelly, 10 years younger than you, has to do everything. It seems you are totally incompetent as a lover. At least your wife gets the benefit of a big cock on a scrawny guy. It is Shelly who takes the initiative with you being drunk.

How soon before your wife trades you in for someone better?

Dear LenardSpencer. I'd like to thank you for your feedback and I will take your constructive criticism to heart. I hope once you are done with yelling at pigeons in the park, you honour me by reading the second part of "Fourplay", as well as my other works in the future. Sincere regards from myself and my beautiful wife.

@LenardSpencer.

It's too easy to laugh at him. It's not her fault it's a small dick and a bad bang.

It is quite normal for his wife to be hot so for swing.

This poor woman must finally be able to have fun with a big cock and be able to say: Thank you my little little husband.

Two dicks plus two whores equals nothing, which describes the story.

Just another little cuck looking for other men to help with his wife.

Ouch! Quick, someone rush me to the burn unit hahaha.

Stories addressed to 'you' never work. I wasn't there and I'm male. You immediately alienated more than half your potential readership.

Too many stupid mistakes.