by petmyhead
Just great! Had a load of themes I’m really interested in myself. I’ll definitely be following your work in the future!
Almost surprised at how much i liked this! Always nice when the dialogue is believable and the descriptions dont feel like they slowdown reading the actual story. Nice one!
Can you keep this story going or something??? That was incredible and amazing. I love it.
Your story is amazing. It is a unique concept for a superpower. I would love to see where this story continues.
The idea of this is pretty cool. I think there's potential of a 5-star story if it's fleshed out a little more.