by petmyhead
The idea of this is pretty cool. I think there's potential of a 5-star story if it's fleshed out a little more.
Your story is amazing. It is a unique concept for a superpower. I would love to see where this story continues.
Can you keep this story going or something??? That was incredible and amazing. I love it.
Almost surprised at how much i liked this! Always nice when the dialogue is believable and the descriptions dont feel like they slowdown reading the actual story. Nice one!
Just great! Had a load of themes I’m really interested in myself. I’ll definitely be following your work in the future!