by Thomas_Lodge
Very excited for next week’s chapter, but i’m assuming in two weeks he’ll be slurping on Robbie’s and i can’t wait for that
Honestly for someone who seems to display a genuine talent for writing, you should learn not to drag your stories out so much. That only makes the best of stories boring. Also, I know English isn't your first language, but there are people called editors and proofreaders and they are greatly needed here. FF
Love the story, chapters need to be longer. Feel like end of this chapter he could have sucked off both Carlos and Robbie.
I want Rob to get his karma. All these new ventures he goes into he doesn’t even consider what Conner has to lose.
such a good obedient little whore for his daddy. keep it coming, he's almost ready...
The end is nearing, Connor is, bit by bit arriving at the point where he will be cock only.
When was the last time he had pussy and he doesn't seem to miss it.
Just gets better and better! Robie & Connor both seem to be getting hard a lot!