by McWrites97
A lot of wishful thinking as well.
Glad to see, at the end, a bit of a backbone in him. Also glad that there's a conflict between wishes and need (dominance vs maintaining the basic personality).
Meaning : choices have to be made together with accepting consequences. Whatever the choice.
Remains one question : who, you think, is the real dominant? The demanding, and getting, submissive or this Ryan.
One point of criticism though: please think positions through. Eg spanking an upright person with her hands restricted behind her back.
I m curious for the next chapters!