All Comments on 'From Hookups to More... Pt. 06'

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AlexiaAlexanderAlexiaAlexander11 months ago

This hits lots of my wishes.

Smartest1Smartest110 months ago

A lot of wishful thinking as well.

Glad to see, at the end, a bit of a backbone in him. Also glad that there's a conflict between wishes and need (dominance vs maintaining the basic personality).

Meaning : choices have to be made together with accepting consequences. Whatever the choice.

Remains one question : who, you think, is the real dominant? The demanding, and getting, submissive or this Ryan.

One point of criticism though: please think positions through. Eg spanking an upright person with her hands restricted behind her back.

I m curious for the next chapters!

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