All Comments on 'From Jeannie to Vanessa Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Not much sex but...

...still a great story, and an interesting description of the logic of the "attack." Will be interesting to see how you moved forward.

TalondeKarrdeTalondeKarrdeover 4 years ago
logic attack

indeed, and that Vanessa is what makes it authentic and ever more entertaining

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

one star zero logic

how can you forgive him so easily

my blood is boiling i want to shred him to pieces fucking bastard should be in prison

how can you be not angry at him?

yeah jack has really fucked your mind

how easy you are to be manipulated he can see it i can see it too

you dont have to pimp your unsuspecting gf to someone to get raped to know about their submissiveness

he could have blindfolded ,tied and ravished her herself instead of sharing

bdsm must be consensual and should come from the sub itself

this fucking seems like mindfucking and coercion

there is no trust

jack hasnt earn her trust to be her dom

the girl is pretty childish and naive to not understand how craftly jack had already shared and pimped her to his friend w/o even her acknowledgement

this is pure manipulation and rape not bdsm

he lied to her shared her so easily despite she being her fiance

when the time would come he wont even think twice leaving her stranded ,empty hand and mind,in the middle of nowhere ,hurt ,ruined for all the men out there

he sucks at being a dom as well as a trustworthy partner for lifec

now that she knows that she is a sub she should go for someone more experienced and trustworthy who will protect her and not fucking throw her to his friends to be raped and lied to

damn i want to scratch the face of that fucking deedee

oh jack is so nice he is doing this bcoz he loves you yeah yeah bullshit

he is doing this coz you are too naive and easy to manipulate

its his kink not hers he is imposing his kink on her forcing her to accept that she likes it too

how can you not see his master game

this guy doesnt desrve her he is complete asshole

she should make him pay for his betrayal ,fucking betray him ,fuck his ass dry with a dildo

bastard doesnt even deserve a single sec of attention from her

i hate it when girls gives it too bad guys too easily

but sorry girl your brain has been royally fucked by jack as well

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