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All Comments on 'Fucking Magic - A Potion Problem Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Finally! The next part. God!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Best series I’ve ever read

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This one was... ok. The grammar and spelling mistakes were hard, but the worst part was not having names on most of the dialog. I have no idea who said what most of the time, especially when you have 6 people in the scene. It's okay to include "Westley said", even if it's boring it makes it readable.

The sister being a whiny brat because she thinks she's boring was painful to read, but once you get through it and ignore everythign Elaine says it's an ok story.

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11/21/23 - Fucking Magic 15 Submitted. Hopefully in time for Thanksgiving. Part 16 is a real evolvement and is finished and half edited. The series might go to Part 18 or 17 might be really long with an Epilogue. 9/6/23 - Fucking Magic 14 submitted and coming at you in the n...