All Comments on 'Full Mouth of Cum Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Please work on grammar - especially pronoun antecedent agreement. Your sloppiness is very annoying.

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

Doesn't feel like this story is going anywhere. You also really need an editor. I can only take a couple more chapter of him not fucking Lika. Also, if the parents get involved I'm done.

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