All Comments on 'Gary and Jane Go on Holiday Ch. 04'

Author should be punished for keeping this mess going.

Excellent

4/5

I have never seen a guy who can keep going the way Gary does. Jane is hot but I think I’d rather play Ella in the movie! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Writing style could be improved upon especially in conversations but overall I’m enjoying the story. It turns me on.

Well, was Ella allowed to clean the mess off of her face or will she be made to go to dinner with her stinking of cum juices?