All Comments on 'Gary and Jane Go on Holiday Ch. 05'

If you're going to write BDSM or Fetish stories at least post this garbage in the correct category.

Score 2.19 Another pass.

Keep on going with these high scoring stories, as you seem to be a fan of punishment.

Still ok 4/5

Well, again, there is no aftercare and Gary is not feeling badly that he caused so much pain and bruising on his wife's ass. I do hope that she does not allow him to beat her again for a very long time. Getting hit with a cane for 30 stokes is going to leave a lot of bruising for quite some time. Did they not bring any lotion or something to help with the pain and bleeding? Not very smart.