All Comments on 'Gary and Jane Pt. 07'

by ColonelB

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WargamerWargamerabout 2 years ago

Hopefully, forgive the puns, this plan goes arse up. We need some drama and human angst in this story. Something like Sandy loves it and wants to submit to Kevin but he can’t and won’t do it.

They separate over this and Gary and Jane realise what they’ve done to their friends by enacting and pushing their fantasies on to others. They then have to fix the mess.

Or, even better Jane falls in love with Kevin and his horse cock and wants him not Gary.

Gary finally wakes up from the little boy fantasy world he lives in and realises what is happening right in front of his eyes, it’s either fight for your wife and life or divorce. However he is crushed and falls into a world of humiliation and depravity with Sandy, Simone and Alisha.

He finally understands what’s happening to him and fights for what he really wants, Jane

Now that would be worthy drama

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