All Comments on 'Genie Chronicles - EGENIE Pt. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A very enjoyable story. The only problem, to me, has been the mixup in names.

TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthoralmost 2 years agoAuthor

Anonymous- if you are reading this... or anyone else reading... what mix-up in names? I might have missed something, but i couldn't find it

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The name mix up is right after they wake up from their nap after hosing down Kat.

You have Linnie asleep, head on his lap drooling, and then also awake smiling at him while stroking her own legs

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Former military, semi-serious writer. Published a few stories on Amazon as Twisted Dave. I tend to write non-consent/reluctance, took a trip into a romance story, dabble in incest stories and willing to try other genres. I use my writing as a way to cope with everyday stress. ...