All Comments on 'Georgia's Big Problem Ch. 01'

Good in many respects. Good set up, characters and their development up to a point. Georgia hating him and herself for her unwanted arousal was also good to a point. However, once she started sucking his dick, she turned submissively eager too quickly, with too little conflicted, self-loathing struggle against it, too little lingering struggle and attempts to muster some semblance of resistance.

These can be remedied to some extent through lingering guilt and shame, internal struggles, and the recurrence and persistence of some instances of resistance, as futile and fleeting as those may be. I do hope you follow up. You're a good writer overall.

Well written. Good plot structure. Difficult to see how Georgia gets out of this. She is facing not just William but a large network of his as yet invisible associates. Will be interesting to see how this develops.