by Arizonasubguy1
Your story is a prime example. I often wonder why authors don’t simply read their story to correct ALL the errors before submitting it. I believe they would if they cared at all about the reader. You can do so much better.
It is a good story otherwise.
A dedicated cocksucker dreams of this type of scenario. Can’t wait to read more of your work. Thanks for writing.
A decent story for sure. The spelling was atrocious. Proofread, find an editor.
I find the story quite believable. It seems as if author just wanted to spit this story out, like drool, and leave it for us to enjoy. Who said there should be perfect drool? When you are facefucked, you are perfect in that moment, and that is what author has left us with. With that spontaneous moment of his life. Thank you .