by sister jenny
I like the unplanned sequel. Her insecurity and then the will to stink against her sister, then the escalation, very nice.
I think this story can continue. We need to know how Janet feels afterwards. The night is young
Really progressing wuth the sexual indoctrination on poor Janet. Check !
Please, use punctuation to your advantage.
Good story, I liked part 1 a lot, and part 2 is good, but I feel like it was rushed. It went from 0 to 100 in just a couple paragraphs. Keep up the good work, and maybe take your time with part 3, draw it out a little more!
Hi anonymous! And thank you so much.
Not a native speaker so had an editor go through it. But I will try to do better next time!
Part 3? Where should I go?
You have too add an additional story.
Did Janet change after that night? Did she start having more self esteem by knowing she's beautiful, and start wearing short 👗 and skirts?
Did her sexual appetite change where they start having more sex?
This really does need a 3rd part, and it borders on rape.
All the questions xfligator asked.