All Comments on 'Getting to Know Jasmine Ch. 01'

Where is chapter 2. Don’t leave us hanging.

Almost done touching it up, will upload it soon!

Then it's just waiting for it to get approved!

The bad grammar and clunky writing are such messes that I couldn't force myself past the first chapter.

Rattling off women's and men's bodily measurements like sports stats is lazy and unneeded. Leave some things to your reader's imagination. It's much more erotic. I stopped reading after that paragraph. It's an awful way to begin a story.