All Comments on 'Getting to Know the Neighbours Ch. 04'
by He_n_She
- 13 Comments
Impo_64almost 3 years agoThe man was drugging and raping the wives and no one has gone to the police? Really? 1*
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoHow come no-one has called out the male MC for the coward he is? And it was way before he admitted it. You know what's likely to happen to another woman and you not only ignore but allow it?!? Must be a UK thing...
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoThis story is very different from most others in this category, and quite good. And yet, the mouth breathers still post their pathetic comments.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoPlease get an editor. Your stories are littered with mistakes; some of them typos, but some of them clearly just howlers. They distract from the stories.
Your stories have past tenses which lack the usual '-ed' endings, plurals which lack the usual 's' endings, random capital letters, random commas and apostrophes.
Then there are the misused words:
differ instead of defer
drank instead of drunk
took instead of taken
he'd instead of he's
to instead of too (and vice versa)
no once instead of no one
its instead of it's (and vice versa)
there instead of their (and vice versa)'
bull shitter instead of bullshitter
council instead of counsel
butterfly's instead of butterflies
lay instead of laid (and vice versa)
gout's instead of gouts
hear instead of here
quite instead of quiet
And the bizarre 'then repeating the' at the end of an otherwise unfinished sentence.
Your Sister Swap series had even more errors.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoIf you are into the swinging/Cuckolding lifestyle this is the story for you. The writer is trying to push his agenda like many other swinging/cuckolding writers do.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoSo, some of the the comments. Think the is a poor story, badly written...But they're still reading it. Easy to put others down. But hard to put up !
kiwianne12almost 3 years agoI have a confession to make. When Jayne set her husband up by not telling him what the party was, I thought "Just another wife dominating a spineless husband story" and almost gave it away.
My partner who was reading with me said "Let's see what happens with Sally." So we continued. Now I am hooked. Read all 4 stories in one sitting. Can't wait to see what they do to Richard.
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