All Comments on 'Getting to Know the Neighbours Ch. 05'

What works in your sick imagination has nothing to do with reality anymore. But you have known that for a long time. I would like to give you a 1 * because a minus rating is not allowed, otherwise I would like to give you -5 *!

Pretty nasty tags, think I’ll pass on this one.

Stupid story

Scores 1/5

Simply disgusting and sick. This needed a very negative rating.

Today is the day we suffer a tsunami of the shit "writers" here.

Its like January 6th here today. LW is the Capital and these writers are the Trumpanzee's trying to turn it to shit.

Please get an editor. All the stupid mistakes detract from the story.

Wow, Great story hope to hear about the new couple. Fantastic story

I have enjoyed this series but slightly disappointed in this last chapter. I really think you missed the opportunity to do more. For example why did Paul suddenly change? I would also have liked to have learnt more about why Richard didn't do more to embarrass those who apposed his plans.

On the up side, that scene at the swapping party was good. You delivered well there.

Now to address comments that have been made regarding your stories. I think they are unfair considering they come from anonymous or from people who have never published anything here.

While there are some simple mistakes that could have been caught by using a program like Grammar, you basic story and delivering has been good.

Just how I see it.

Anne

For those below who complain about the "Grammar" the site is Literotica not Grammarotrica.

He_n_She tells a very erotic tale. Don't hate, appreciate

Good story but I even I met a girl o liked with full disclosure over past sex partners and she told me she let men fuck her ass and piss on her I’d never get close to be serious to settle down. Anal if in a longer serious relationship but if she just fucked guy once or twice or one night hookups and was taking it in her ass than she is way to much a pig for me . Most woman will lie abut her past especially anal but every guy I knew would push for anal and every girl usually caved at least that one time. Everyone used an apt in a friend basement every neighborhood girl that got fucked down there and there was a lot were seen by most of the friends. I even remember at around 19 I think he was fucked another friends mom and we watched and he had a hidden tapering it . She had both hands wrapped around the sheets and he stuffed her panties in her mouth as her pounded her ass so hard . A bunch of guys piped in the room so she knew we all knew what she did . It was crazy and she freaked out but eventually most fucked her to keep it quiet but what she didn’t know was that no one there would ever tell her kids . A few had even hooked up with the daughters and yes made s point of fucking them in the ass. When young it’s mostly a dumb dominant thing but all don’t enjoy so never force but in early stages of a new relationship is when you try because both are trying to please at that point more than ever .

Great. Change of Story line. , Would of like to see some real punishment of Richard and Maggie tho. Teach them a lesson they wouldn’t recover from

Credit for the revenge plot but it almost came off too easy. Good plot series. As far as writing pace and description well on but could use some better editing. Keep producing

Another marriage heading to the rocks.

Silly Jayne will slut her way out of her marriage and being a slut end up alone. Her husband will find someone who loves just him.

All of them stupid people.

1/5

Yep on the rocks and gone before you know it. I think it’s hilarious! I have to admit I was relieved when the pain just stopped. I told my, soon to be ex wife, At work one other guy said, you do realize she was avoided like the plague. She alienated so many people here. I didn’t know that.at all.but I wasn’t surprised. She also had HR after her because three guys claimed they had lots of information to support all of this. She was terminated 30 days after HR reported this. It’s crazy cuz this highlights how dangerous it can be for any employee to start a brand new relationship. To be honest, they wanted me to stay and unless absolutely necessary, no interaction between them. We are six months past this event. I found out they setup a meeting yesterday about 15 mins after most employees are gone home. She called me like 2 days after and was going on as though I was a girlfriend. I said I dont really care. I’m not trying to be cruel but we ain’t buddies. She destroys what seemed to be a good marriage. She really is that shallow and self centered. Bye byeb