All Comments on 'Grace Kim in the Blackedverse Pt. 01'

Wrong category, barely long enough to be considered a story and it was awful writing.

I would not put this into the loving wives category.

More like fetish.

where is the loving wife; just another attempt to say BBC is the only thing out there; BS. If she does that for a proposal then she'll become his whore and money maker

First, hello troll. Next, you know that toy your parents had you use as a child, the one with the square holes and triangle holes, etc. How the hell can’t you figure out the correct group to post this? No hints and no participation trophy for you.

Just a bit out of category ?

Could this be satire?

Well, what a loving couple they are going to be. Outstanding twist to an otherwise average type story. It would be worth a chapter or two outlining their relationship with each other before the proposal and their involvement with black cocks. Then, another chapter or two of what happens during their engagement, what happens just before their wedding (will she be walking down the aisle with cum dripping down her legs), the honeymoon (how many black guys will she take on), and how many black babies will she have, what roles does Ryan have will all this is going on? Nice start.

Glad you're back! Love reading about these asian girls be sluts. Hope there will be more coming!

This would do way better in interracial or erotic couplings. It's gonna get nuked in LW.

Haven't read one single line of this flash, and have no intention of voting on it.

But, right from its title and underline, if there's ever been the most PERFECT EXAMPLE of WRONG CATEGORY ever added to Loving Wives...

If this effort wasn't made for Interracial, then why on Earth such a category even exist in the first place???

Honestly, someone PLEASE explain that to me! Make it make sense!

I realize your entire goal was to cause a storm of negative reactions however this racist dribble belongs in the section created for just this sort of racist dribble.

This section is for other sorts of dribble as I am most certain you are aware.

Should have put this in interracial

Lol Jesus, sorry I put it in the wrong category. I fixed the forthcoming parts to be in a different category. I'll try to move this too but I'm not seeing an option to do so.

Laughable

To katib. I hope so.

I don’t get it

Someone is jealous of wmaf...

Good storyline. Some lead up to tell the reader why Grace is a bbc slut would have been helpful.