All Comments on 'Grandpa Cums to Dinner'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

No offense but this was a hot mess. It should have just been one perspective. Not… 6 or 7. And how your actual sex scenes are 10 sentences maybe but 90% of the rest of it is just confusing hopping from one to another is also off putting.

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