All Comments on 'Green Room 05'

Confused, you just released the same story with a different title

Yes. It should never have been posted here IMHO. It was also posted as “Rape on a Train” which is accurate, in non-consensual, which is also accurate.

Sometimes I can't decide on the category they belong in there are also changes, edits, sometimes different endings, or expanding the story with more detail thanks for reading my stories Cheri XOXO

The feedback/emails from this story saying I let down my lesbian readers should understand my writing is not always a bed of roses it can take twist and turns down dark paths much like life the contrast of such a tender moment between old friends plunging into horror on a train seems to me to mimic life I write from my own experiences with a literary embellishment and life is not always easy thank keep the feedback coming XOXO Cheri