All Comments on 'Green Rose of the Underground Ch. 07'

Well! Here we go. The sex scenes were nice - perhaps a tad cliche, but then again, I've been reading erotica for a long, long time.

I'm still waiting for the other boot to drop - when they get to his place and this seduction and luxury is traded for cooking and cleaning... Or when she confesses love and he has to explain he runs a whorehouse and isn't exactly the "fall in love sort" - or when she sees that he presumably sleeps around and gets her heart broken even before confession.

You've set yourself up interesting characters with plenty of dramatic tension allowing you to throw obstacles in their way, and that's half the job!