by TrinityStorm
Great story just love the Concept of them being remotely controlled and raped by under and unknown men so Erotic. Please keep writing on this Excellent story line..
I hope the next chapter is not far off. Good so far, but let's make it either Jessica or Jennifer. Attention to details is is important when the story line is this good.
I see someone has watched fantasy style movies.
Good for a first story, but some twists and turns go too fast. But they could be concentrated and have fun a little longer.
In stories with electricity, I don't really like it when only strong shocks are presented. It would be nice if there were weaker e-stims that create discomfort but they can be tolerated for a while. Maybe these types of stimulation should go to the pussy.
Since there is a pose training in the story, be sure to add a pose: hands behind the head, legs apart, knees half-bent.
All I have to say this is real coming to us, it's called AI, simply used by bad people..
I am sorry I was away, some rl stuff. I should be resuming my writeu p on this series soon!