All Comments on 'Hacked, Locked and Enslaved Pt. 02'

by TrinityStorm

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aznlookinguyaznlookinguy11 months ago

Way too short. I want a gulp, not a sip.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great story just love the Concept of them being remotely controlled and raped by under and unknown men so Erotic. Please keep writing on this Excellent story line..

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Excellent!

MikePaulWritesMikePaulWrites11 months ago

I hope the next chapter is not far off. Good so far, but let's make it either Jessica or Jennifer. Attention to details is is important when the story line is this good.

kajkellikajkelli11 months ago

It is a bit sci-fi, but highly entertaining and, um, arousing.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I see someone has watched fantasy style movies.

Good for a first story, but some twists and turns go too fast. But they could be concentrated and have fun a little longer.

In stories with electricity, I don't really like it when only strong shocks are presented. It would be nice if there were weaker e-stims that create discomfort but they can be tolerated for a while. Maybe these types of stimulation should go to the pussy.

Since there is a pose training in the story, be sure to add a pose: hands behind the head, legs apart, knees half-bent.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

All I have to say this is real coming to us, it's called AI, simply used by bad people..

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Who tf is Jennifer? why did Jessica randomly change names

WatpWatp10 months ago

Brilliant start keep up the good work

WatpWatp10 months ago

We want more we want more we want more

WatpWatp9 months ago

😢 it’s been too long

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

More please

TrinityStormTrinityStorm8 months agoAuthor

I am sorry I was away, some rl stuff. I should be resuming my writeu p on this series soon!

WatpWatp8 months ago

Glad more is coming 😛

WatpWatp6 months ago

Any update?

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