All Comments on 'Happy Birthday, Baby'

That was a great story. Came across as very real, and felt like it could've been happening to me!!

The set up was very good and the pay-off was even better!! Loved the ice cube trick!!

Wow, this was really good. I had no problems reading it, grammatically. Very well written and not too trashy or raunchy. Loved the connection they had. Keep writing more of these please. :)